Ok guys, here is a couple of screenies of the face so far. Let me know what you think!
Changes from my original;
Removed shading around the ball of the nose tip to get rid of the button-nose look
Made the lid section of the under eyelid slimmer so when the eyes are large it’s less pronounced
Removed a bit of the under-eye shading
Highlighted the entire length of the nose and shaded it a little differently
Removed the shading where the nasolabial crease would be
Lessened the amount of cheek shading
Muted the eye socket shading and highlighting
Made the inner-eye corner less pronounced
Softened the lip texture

Example 1.

Example 2.
So, there you have it, let me know your thoughts!
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P.S. I’ve already added a little more lower lip highlighting to the texture and will fix the shadowing at the outer edge of the nostril sides tomorrow